Thursday, February 2, 2012

Without My Love Comments

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outside my window a nightingale sings,
All the things could be swim before my eyes
a senator, a police officer, a lawyer
Hollow praise and heartfelt criticism fill my ears.
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Nicholas Abaddon
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Jessie Jett 11 April 2012

I enjoyed reading this one. So far it's been a little different with a little more emotion. Nice write. I like how there can be an insinuation of the dove and a love that has peace.

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Dave Walker 02 February 2012

A great poem really like it. A great write. May i invite you to read my poem called, I'll Change For You.

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Nicholas Abaddon

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