Monday, January 13, 2003

Without Looking Comments

Rating: 3.0

Either at my friend's daughter's
sixteen-year-old body dumped
on the morgue slab, T-shirt
stuck fast to one ripped
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Patricia Goedicke
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Susan Williams 21 February 2016

Powerful. A soul in pain here. - - - - - what prepares us for what will never save us?

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M Asim Nehal 21 February 2016

Nicely written poem, thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 21 February 2016

Difficult it is to look! Thanks for sharing.

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Robert Quilter 22 September 2008

Quite an opening stanza, that has lived with me the days, since i first read it. When you learn Ms.Goedicke battled cancer a lot of her life and the failing mental powers of her beloved second husband...read 'When Earth Begins to End' it puts a new light on some of the poetry.

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