Without Him Comments

Tears flow The heart sighs Sun rises Night falls Another day

Rain falls Sun shines Tears flow The heart sighs... without him.. very nice poem. makes us think a lot. tony

Lenience and grandeur in play. Elegant piece, poetess.

It's heart touching deep feelings impressively brought forth with insight. Thanks for sharing.

A good attempt in the chapter of life without love. Thank you very much.

simple words that touch the heart. Great write BeachGirl.

please see my nearly-two year old comment, below. now this poem will soon appear in my/our Section B of August's 'showcase for PH poets'. thanks. bri :) p.s. i just saw your response to my earlier comment, dear. :) :) i almost didn't read this over again (this year i mean) . I did. I'm glad. If i hadn't, I'd sure be sad. ................excellent poem!

Excellent expression. I enjoyed it. So, I love this poem. Thanks a lot dearest poet Beach Girl.

Breathing in and out, being filled with the emptiness of not having his love. Breathing out, tears flow, heart sighs. Very expressive of a love not being returned, and it's accompanying sorrow. Thank you very much for sharing, I loved this poem. RoseAnn

Excellent. All the best love poetry, I think, deals with someone or something missing.

Thanks Bri! I corrected the word breathe above! And no dear, the poem's not about you. :)))

can you send me a personal poet's note? i'd love to see what it has to say! i know it must be tough without me, but i AM a married him after all. sorry. :) but, seriously, or at least semi-seriously, i like the poem. i'll send it to MyPoemList, which i may never read from in the future, but ya never know. i'm not sure if you meant breath or breathe. breathe would be consistent with close and open, but either one works. i have at times mixed up breath and breathe, but i think i have it down now; the verb breathe ends in E. i don't know which is worse, to have a heart and lose it to someone, or the not have a heart, and have my wife complain about it from time to time. :) bri thanks for sharing.

very nicely done, , , i applaud you!

Sun rises Night falls Another day Without him Great Nice Thanks

In a poetic way you have expressed your emptiness and vacuum...... beautiful You may read my poem I miss you.

very rhythmic feel...a nice read offered! ! !

Lovely poem. Simply beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Days passes Rain and spring comes and goes Memories fades

a beautiful expression..........................loved this pen.....

Just read this poem, it's very nice. You have described the feelings that one has when one is 'In Love'. 'Rain falls Sun shines Tears flow The heart sighs' Beautiful!