Saturday, July 11, 2009

Without Her Comments

Rating: 5.0

Dem i just met her
& i feel like she always been with me
the way that she moves
& the way she kiss me..
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Steven Pimentel
COMMENTS
Blue Eyes 27 August 2009

u broke my already broken heart with ur words.

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Allan Macli Borges 25 July 2009

very nice poem, please read my 'about dama'.

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Omar Ibrahim 25 July 2009

she is like the sky! ! ! good expression and i liked the ending too!

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Anthony Han 19 July 2009

nice ending on your poem man

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Marieta Maglas 14 July 2009

nice poem, well penned with great ideas...10 from me

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the poem is good, i like the ending much...

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Lola Hi 11 July 2009

nice romantinc poem.very good.

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Melanie Guerrero 11 July 2009

: ] Love it Def. qreat poem Added to my fav.!

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A T 11 July 2009

i like how you ended the poem... very good writing

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Steven Pimentel

Steven Pimentel

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