Friday, June 24, 2016

Without Fields Of Eternity. Comments

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Marcondes Pereira
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Richard Wlodarski 05 March 2017

Awesome imagery: fields of eternity. I love that so much more than just the word eternity. Your poem is well thought out and very well written. Succinct and profound. Very thought provoking.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 29 June 2016

Life is not for wandering and getting marooned at the end. It should be a vehicle for the soul to be taken to a designed destination of pristine objectives. Thought provoking aptly worded poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Marcondes P 30 June 2016

Dear reader, I do agree with you! Life is a journey created to us discover a deep meaning to exist and develop our abilities. Life is like a dive inside ourselves.

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Hans Vr 24 June 2016

I love this poem. Keeping fields of eternity in mind may endlessly enrich our lifes

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Marcondes P 25 June 2016

Good morning Han! , I'm very happy to know that you loved my poem. Fields of eternity is a beautiful image to keep i mind, isn't it?

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