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Do not break promises or lacerate trust.
The cuts to others open furrows in your own flesh.
By lacerating their hopes you destroy the bases
on which the world rests.
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Tom Billsborough
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Pamela Sinicrope 05 June 2017

Teach them to die sinking in the heights- that's a line I like. The writing seems very thick, but there are some pearls in there.

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Tom Billsborough 05 June 2017

I agree that it is very dense in parts. It's not my style of writing but it's a challenge! It's somewhat didactic in style. I prefer to work from Images myself.

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Tom Billsborough

Tom Billsborough

Preston Lancashire England
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