The start was slow and unpredictable,
You attracted me with your nature and handsome face,
So soft, like my own secret loft,
High emotions, tenderness, openness,
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Heartfelt and touching! Well done my friend!
A beautiful train of thoughts, well articulated and nicely encapsulated into a fantastic poem. A superbly written piece. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem THE PHOENIX STRANGLER.
.....wonderful use of imagery...n metaphors....a great work as always hazel....
.. a brilliant romantic poem... every sentence is beautiful.. and love the title as well...
Keep writing my friend.poetry needs you more. without you poetry will loose her pacific balance. but dont forget to invite to make me deprive from making a dive in your swt emotion
So romantic- you have me at the top of your wishing list I wish I could write like this! ! ! Great job ~mye3 poet
Loved it! You really kept my attention... and what a beautiful story too. ~Karen
nice romantic saga..deeply written with full suppliment of romance..you have just do a full justice with ur poem..a splendid write, , , enjoyable
When is unlocked the Irish Heart in this way - that is Without compare