Monday, August 11, 2008

Without Comfort Comments

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The world has faded into an eclipse
As someone steals the breath from her lips
The nectar that was us can no longer be
As what was her has now been set free
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Timothy Weiermann
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Emo Seb 21 August 2008

beautiful. i luv it.

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Kathleen West 19 August 2008

You're poems have a beautiful rhythmn and a wistfulness to them. You are young and have everything ahead of you. Live now! Enjoy now! ! You will meet many girls in your lifetime. You write wonderful poetry and expressing yourself in writing validates how you feel at the time. Thanks for sharing.

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Clarissa Tobey 19 August 2008

you have writen a couple like this one and i think you are in love or have great feelings for this girl it shows it in your poems

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Anjali Sinha 19 August 2008

Lonely once more, My forever-long bane Without the comfort of her, How shall I stay sane? Na dont u worry ull always be sane. great write tim. keep sharing love anju

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Tyease Collins 11 August 2008

Absolutely beautiful poem...its so descripitive and just...wonderful -tess

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Timothy Weiermann

Timothy Weiermann

Tucson, Arizona
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