Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, April 24, 2016

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Without being

Even though I couldn't marry
I will keep his torch alive and carry
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 25 April 2016

Aarti Roy....True U got me Thank you 24 Apr by hasmukh amathalal | Reply

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 24 April 2016

I took steps to withdraw And allow Her own world to be guided Without being interrupted Or hindered and halted Nice ending Sir. It was a pleasant drive through the poem. It's quite melodious apart from its rich poetical dimensions. Thank you Sir for the poem. It deserves 10. I invite you to spare a few valuable moments over my page and render your invaluable remarks on my poems. .Thanks again. Subhas

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 April 2016

I took steps to withdraw And allow Her own world to be guided Without being interrupted Or hindered and halted

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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