Without A Trace Comments

Dreams vanished just as air from a punctured ballooon! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

A Beautiful description of earthquake and its side effects of killing many people. Very true said in few lines... Trees uprooted, Everything scattered like planets thrown out of orbits......Loved reading each lines. Beautifully portrayed. +++10

A Beautiful description of earthquake and its side effects of killing many people. Very true said in few lines... Trees uprooted, Everything scattered like planets thrown out of orbits......Loved reading each lines. Beautifully portrayed. +++10

A Beautiful description of earthquake and its side effects of killing many people. Very true said in few lines... Trees uprooted, Everything scattered like planets thrown out of orbits......Loved reading each lines. Beautifully portrayed. +++10

A Beautiful description of earthquake and its side effects of killing many people. Very true said in few lines... Trees uprooted, Everything scattered like planets thrown out of orbits......Loved reading each lines. Beautifully portrayed. +++10

A Beautiful description of earthquake and its side effects of killing many people. Very true said in few lines... Trees uprooted, Everything scattered like planets thrown out of orbits......Loved reading each lines. Beautifully portrayed. +++10

Merciless killings by humans, everyone all forms of life are annoyed of the humans, if so how God cannot remain unconcerned, we may face a mass destruction on earth. It's a timely warning.....................10

Hi valsa, a unique superb poem in fine seismic diction and description, awesome even if tragic. Where was this earthquake? Great to read u again, hapy new year.

A bit of hyperbole perhaps but there is no denying the shock both literally and figuratively of an earthquake. The real tragedy though of such a minor disaster is that we refuse to learn from past experience. The tragedy of the event pales in comparison to man's refusal to build earthquake proof houses which a modern wood home certainly is. No one dies in a wood house in an earthquake. Reinforced concrete homes are also relatively safe. Landslides and floods are a different matter as are volcanic eruptions. Indeed our own sun will eventually destroy earth completely when it burns out. We certainly must leave earth if we want our children to survive at all in the long run. People who put their families in harm's way for economic reasons cannot completely escape blame however. It is not just a cold cruel world that rains disaster upon us, but our willingness to accept what should be unacceptable risk even for poor people. Still the history of the planet tells anyone who will listen, that we live in a 'dangerous neighborhood, ' no matter where you live on the planet and that life as we know it is fragile. Sometimes indeed, 'lightning' can strike everywhere at the same time, which is what happened when the dinosaurs were exterminated from the planet by a single meteor strike apparently.

destiny of our green earth in its tragic end Women and children, belongings and livestock, everything buried alive. In the vortex of fury, nothing is left

I very much liked the metre of the poem, which is quite appropriate to the sad catastrophe described. While reading the poem, one can almost feel the vibration of a quake. I stand up to applaud.10/10 from me.

Heart touching description on earthquake, penned to a painful sight. Many thanks madam.

Very powerful yet concise description of human tragedy.

While some are left with shock and grief others disappear with out a trace. Tragedy of earthquake is overwhelming so well painted in your words.

The destruction so truly described is complete. Yet a new day provides new hope, hopefully. A powerful poem.

A heart touching description of an earthquake, Valsa is master of description................10

Yes with such catastrophe all is complete......Valsa.......no emotions left to heave a sign or anyone left to be traumatized and it comes so ease......very insightful and composed brilliantly....10