Saturday, November 1, 2014

Without A Trace Comments

Rating: 5.0

You went away without a trace
If I could only again see your face
Looked for you at every corner
Grieved for you just like a mourner
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Patricia Grantham
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Joseph Anderson 25 February 2015

Sincere, sad, sweetly poignant with a happy ending. Well rhymed and cadenced. A pleasure to read. Love those happy endings-10

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 13 February 2015

It is nice of a person to go in search of a friend. It is a wonderful feeling to find the friend and taking into arms.

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Valsa George 10 November 2014

A sweet poem full of warmth and I am happy that the relentless search for the lost face finally ended in a happy way with the person himself coming to your open arms, never to be separated again!

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 08 November 2014

Very insightful and scripted very poignantly with feelings so eternal.......this's amazing......Grantham

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Mantu Mahakul 06 November 2014

If I could again see your face......beautiful poem ever composed. Excellent one shared in forum.

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Geetha Jayakumar 01 November 2014

A Beautiful poem. Met the person only after reaching the final destination means the person no longer existed and you went searching in every corner. finally it tells the sweet union of two souls after death. Beautiful presentation. Deep and moving write. Loved reading it.

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Shabeeh Haider 01 November 2014

Beautifully written, Please see my poetry and send your feedback

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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