Friday, October 2, 2009

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Rating: 5.0

The subject of that letter was 'I understand... why you don`t understand me...'
And I bursted into tears,
I thought 'oh Lord........ if not me then who does...'
It`s so painful when you stand, but no one can see,
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Emma Adamyan
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Sadiqullah Khan 01 January 2010

Things will be alright soon. Emma.

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Afzal Shauq 07 October 2009

The answer is even if he wants to, he cannot do, For as a Chinese proverb says: 'There`s the time for everything', So here`s my warn for those who could live without love long enough... Don`t dare to love someone who was created to laugh! Don`t touch that person even with your glance, In order not to spoil another`s chance, For if you do spoil, you`ll be punished by God, As He doesn`t allow his gifts to be thrown... I think, no need to go on, For the truth is exactly shown a great and perfect poetic story done in innovative and very much impressive way.. chinese proverb and whats based on.. is the fanatstic touch of story and how it starts and where ends..is professioanly perfect..interlinkages of verses and composition of words are sweet way written and the whole poem seems in a melodic and poetic style.. intersting..yeah very much and you really deserve to get 10 out of 10..well done

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