Monday, March 30, 2009

Without A Doubt Comments

Rating: 5.0

just once.
be obvious.
just tonight
lean over
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sherrie tappenden
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Kee Thampi 24 August 2009

a kiss of words makes this poem too long. uncomfortable. agonising. make that touch just too intimate. fingers on fingers.

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Phillip Sawatzky 03 April 2009

Somewhere in this poem a heart breaks over and over. Somewhere in this poem two people are miles apart while a whisper away from presumed love....I love the listlessness, I ache for the longing implied, I am there.

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