Monday, June 5, 2006
Without A Clue Comments
Rating: ★5.0
No one knows the rocks that burden my shoulder,
breaking bones piece by piece.
No one sees my rapid heartbeats,
as they are drowned by head hard thoughts.
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jack russell
23 February 2007
Your words have an awareness beyond your years. There are many clues what is to come from your pen in the future. Fine work :) Best wishes. jack
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7/19/2025 8:35:48 PM # 1.0.0
I was really enjoying the imagery in this one; then I got to the last two lines and was completely blown away! This is so awesome, Yekaterina.