Wednesday, April 27, 2016

Within This Space Comments

Rating: 5.0

I could see it from the freeway
It looked so empty to me
Windows boarded up and such
As vacant as could be.
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Marilyn Lott
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Susan Williams 09 May 2016

A call to the imagination! Houses. The more battered, old, and mistreated the more I wonder about their history. This poem is a homage to the human curiosity about other humans and the life they live- -not in any judgmental way but in a sympathetic wondering way wanting to know what led to the demise of a family home. Excellent poem excellently written, nary a poetic foot put wrong. a big 10.

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