Wednesday, December 5, 2018

Within This Body Comments

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- Within the body-

Within this body the vast ocean,
Waves upon waves the sound dements.
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Prabir Gayen
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srijita101998@gmail.com 09 December 2018

Every Body is a miniature Universe............. ............ .................

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Dr Antony Theodore 05 December 2018

Within this body the infinity doth dwell. Living is the root to find the root, From all the sides and cores, Divinity awakens to embrace theshore. a fine poem, so many thoughts, body, mind, soul, infinity, nature, earth... so many points to ponder over.. a masterly work. tony

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Prabir Gayen 05 December 2018

This is one of my favorite one.... carefully I tried to capture the great nothingness

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 05 December 2018

it is very long use more words for body the poem will become sound google and see make paras of your poetry i will make a happier read also others do comment and read your synapses will yield I read max 19 lines poetry

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Aabha 05 December 2018

Every Body is a miniature Universe

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