Wednesday, August 5, 2009

Within The Waves Comments

Rating: 5.0

Along vast beaches the rippling tides
to strong stone promenades duly proceed.
Taking with them pre-washed shingle that glides,
in a to-and-fro act of endless speed.
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Ernestine Northover
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Andrew Blakemore 06 August 2009

It's 10/10 from me for any poem that contains the word 'myriads' and this one has a bit of Italian thrown in for good measure too! Got to be worth at least 15/20! Great poem Ernestine, it's good to have you back as good as ever. Love, Andy xx

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Lynda Robson 05 August 2009

Lovely flow to this Ernestine, always good to read your poetry 10 Lynda xx

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Daniel Kempson 05 August 2009

Beautil write enjoyed so much thank you 10

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