Friday, January 30, 2009

Within The Trees Comments

Rating: 5.0

Deep within the mountains
Up on the hill inside the trees
A child searches for something warm
To help so he don't freeze
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Matt Burgett
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beautiful wording and the views are awesome.. great write Krista

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now this is well thought of. beautifully placed everything..

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Ana Zaldivar 30 January 2009

this is an excelent beautiful poem. It dserves a 100! thasnks for sharing this.

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