Friday, August 20, 2010

Within The Skin Of A Word Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world around me is a ravenous monster
He does not stop to chew his meal
Rather he swallows whole, body and soul
If you search his inner parts for a heart
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Poetic Soul 24 October 2010

A well thought out write on reality. Thanks for sharing.

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Afzal Shauq 21 August 2010

thanks for sharing..its really a good rite with reality based idea..well done..sweet its 10/10

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