Thursday, October 23, 2008

Within The Heaven Comments

Rating: 4.5

I can't believe
I am broken
To two
I want to hide
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Sandra Saif
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Justin Walker 24 October 2008

this poem is real nice i can feel something from it. especially ' a light with out fears' for some reason i kno exactly wat ur talkin about. i can tell ur real good u kno how to hide the real meanings of the words in a more disguisable way. (if that makes sense haha)

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Billy Joe Collins 23 October 2008

nice i can see your hearts feelings when i read this poem

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