Wednesday, December 1, 2021

Within The Flame Comments

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Within the flame of cosmic scale,
a nebula beyond the vale
of tears and fears and random mirth
upon an azure planet earth,
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Harley White
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Dr. M. Asim Nehal 02 December 2021

Very well said. In spark of human death and birth as yet we write our living tale within the flame…

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Harley White 01 January 2022

Yes, we are still living that spark. Thank you.

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David Wood 01 December 2021

Brilliant Rondeau and brilliant poet's notes.

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Harley White 01 January 2022

So pleased you found them 'brilliant'...

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Aarzoo Mehek 01 December 2021

Brilliantly penned poem.

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Harley White 01 January 2022

I pleased you found it well penned.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 01 December 2021

Excellent work! I find maturity in your poetry.

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Harley White 01 January 2022

Thanks for the approving words...

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 01 December 2021

you describe the galaxy beautifully brilliant

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Harley White 01 January 2022

So glad you found it well described... thank you...

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