Within The Dew Comments
O my love, why sat beyond the edge?
Away from universe, away from the hedge
Come to me with thy courage-
I keepeth for thee, starry scarf
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Stunning write with beautiful and mesmerizing lines! Love this very inspired write!
A lovely poem expressing the heart's deepest wish in images of nature
Wanna be ocean just by a dew I know because i wish it too As we know the pure love they do In droplet from above, symbolic for life being new A pure one, clean from any torture view...._SOul
that's the magic within dew the beauty of universe dwells in one heart
It's very beautiful beyong explanation, and fittingly fixed with the beginning at the end, focused well.
Beautiful imagery has been embellished by endearing smith flow of rhythm & rhyme, use of diction is fabulous...especially written with the warmth of emotions, indeeed romantic poem..
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7/27/2025 9:47:48 PM # 1.0.0
The longing to merge with the loved one is beautifully expressed through imagery drawn from Nature! There are some beautiful lines in the poem which I enjoyed much!