Within The Alamo Comments

a line drawn clean By the sweep of a sword. No help was coming, now- That hope was done. No more the free air, a very fine poem. tony

No more free air No more the Sun Beautiful and profound conceptualization.

.............truly this is a marvelous poem......you penned it perfectly...

Great poem. A piece of history portrayed with tenderness.

This is a great poem! If you watch the newest movie on the alamo, titled, 'The Alamo', you will see that this movie left out the scence portrayed by this poem which loses some of the courage and bravey always know in the story of the alamo. Besides that, this is a poem that carrys lots of imagery and gives you a good feeling inside! Jake Pappas P.S. Remember The Alamo! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !