Within His Arms Comments

Within his arms I can't go wrong Within his arm is where I belong, , I like these two lines, , , well written Kat! ! ! !

This poem is amazing and simply superb. Though this poem is short but the message conveyed is very huge. These are favorite line of the poem. 'Within his arms I feel safe and sound against his chest I hear his heart pound Within his arms I can't go wrong Within his arms is where I belong' Words used are rare but good usage of collocations and wordings are appreciable. Well written poem. Great going.... descent work by the poet. I hope the poet should climb the ladder by poems like these. Well done Kaitreena.......Cheers for now..