Friday, February 1, 2019

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A cavity un-probed by light
embraces an unfolding tapestry
of life, curtain drawn
but the orchestra hums
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Seamus O' Brian
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Glen Kappy 02 February 2019

neal, this is lovely and lyrical in a solemn way. i especially like raging hegemonies of the urgent, the rush of thoughts suggested by the simple and and and, and the last two stanzas which eloquently speak of what awaits us all. hoping you are well and thriving, glen

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Seamus O' Brian

Seamus O' Brian

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