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nice knowing such an accomplished poet all the bestest but still do read MOM'S SMILES WILL YE POETESS

THIS IS MY MAIDEN READ YOU HAVE NOT composed many poetry but do read my good one MOMS SMILES U WILL LIKE

Awakening dreams, dare I erupt.... dare I even touch...... lovely expressions of deep love. thanku dear poetess for this poem. tony

To be or not to be? —the answer is TO BE, always to be.... exist. Thank you for taking the time to read my crap, lol. Namaste.

you always look for those dreams. its near impossible to give up. though we try. very well written.

I dare say... you have talent and a lovely heart’s perspective. I wonder who the bard is? Thumbs up.

The bard i used to love! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Dare I awaken dreams Long forgotten, Dare I even touch? ! Dare I say words Long comatose, Dare I erupt? ! - - - - - - In the life's journey we have many dreams.Some dreams we realize, some dreams remain dormant and we feel dissatisfied for those lost dreams.Should we touch those dreams long forgotten? A lovely poem on this 'perennial question'.

Dare I resuscitate Asleep within, The Bard I used to love? ! looking for the Bard who is living in you in a secret cave. may be writing poems will answer your question in your poet's note

Well conceived and nicely crafted with artistic brilliance. An insightful creation. Thanks for sharing Adiela.

A good start with a nice poem, Adiela Akoo. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.