Tuesday, May 22, 2012

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Can you take away the sweetness from a rose
or a brilliance from the star
Are you afraid
are you torn to peaces
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Kasia Fedyk
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If my comforting word Were medicine: That could spring to life Your barren mind Rinse from your forehead the Marks of shame I would cease not to sing But that cruel messiah Is not owned by any soul In this world but you And only you (Faiz)

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Simon Collins 22 May 2012

Awesome Kasia, this poem speaks volumes, thanks

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Captain Cur 22 May 2012

This is a wow and truthful poem, just look inside and find all possibilities. Great write!

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