Saturday, February 21, 2009

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You pray to solve your outer damage
there is no words explains this pain
behind the mirror - time goes savage
insight the darkness - comes insane
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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 21 April 2009

wonderful write.. perfectly written and full of thoughts and emotions

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Ian Bowen 08 March 2009

Well written piece. Much enjoyed.10/10 Ian

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