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first the bud and then the flower unfolding a silent process nicely written; -10 anjali (do read mine Michael Jackson-A peter pan)

Finely penned! in short said a lot........10++

unfolding is a painful process, sarvesh...

sensitive, very sensitive....loved it.

lovely one..... i liked it..

crying is the best thing....it clears our heart, then the agony dies, the story gets lost in the vaults of mind! ! ! ! very nice, sensibly thought out write!