Saturday, February 20, 2021

Withered On The Grass Comments

Rating: 5.0

How I loved my pretty rose so fragrant in the sun,
In those butterscotch hours when time was young,
And the obsidian nights were made for dreaming,
Long before the sunset, when birds were screaming!
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
COMMENTS
David Wood 21 February 2021

Absolutely beautiful. This is poetry at it's best. A good 5*++++

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Captain Cur 21 February 2021

A well toasted, sweet and buttery write. A sumptuous affair with that rose lying in a bed of beautifully worded images.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 February 2021

Lovely poem. Sublime metaphors rhymes and flow.

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Kostas Lagos 20 February 2021

Roses make everything more beautiful.Lovely poem

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