With Your Eyes Comments
I am enjoying everything! With your eyes!
the incessant rain on a valley, the blessing of a sun-kissed day,
the snow-capped mountain-peaks,
the glorious sandy beach, the glow
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I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills, the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans - everything, with your eyes! I admire the lofy poetic expression. Just beautiful. Top score!
2) Very fascinating is the poem BUT also how the poetess writes this poem, she sees through your eyes.5 Stars full and to my Favourites!
While the poetess is telling that she is observing the view outside with your eyes, I get the feeling that indeed that IS so. When rereading again, this poem gets lovelier and finally loveliest! Beautifully described imagery.
Hi Malabika, Congratulations on being selected poet of the day. This wonderful poem deserves the honour. The ability to look at, see the world through someone else’s eyes is fabulous. You have tried that and, may I say, come out successfully. Loved the way you have expressed, “The world is beautiful “, with the lovely preceding lines setting the background. “You will bring it all to me Saved in your heart Like a pearl encased in its shell” lovely. A 100 and onto MyPoemList.
Wow! Thank you so much! Really like the way you have analyzed the lines!
Great creativity. I enjoyed the imagery. Thank you for your comments on What Remains.
Your poem " What Remains" is brilliant! looking forward to reading more of your thoughtful and magical poems!
Lovely poem. These must be the eyes of a very special person who cares to show you the world! Congratulations!
Thank you. You are absolutely right! Really appreciate your comment!
A truly beautiful poem that made me think to be more grateful. I imagined it was written for one who was blind. Thank you
That's why we write poems - to make us think and make others think! In many different ways! Thank you. Really appreciate your comment!
unexpectedly, i have found myself at a PC today and remembered to look up your selected poem of the day (member) . i like it. but i wonder what " with your eyes" means and whose eyes you are referring to here. hmm? 1- you received eye transplants and are seeing with donors eyes (unlikely) ? ? ? OR 2- you are " seeing" all those things in the artwork, photography, or writing of another? ? bri :) philosophical at the ending? to MyPoemList
Thanks, Bri, for caring so much to find a PC and taking time to read my poem! You sent it to your Poem List too! You are a poet, I will leave it to you to interpret and answer the questions in your own way! That's what poets do!
A lovely poem Malabika ji. When you see the world through the eyes of your beloved, then everything becomes more charming, more beautiful and more enjoyable. Hearty Congratulations dear Poetess for the POD.......10
Thank you, Geeta! You are absolutely right - when you see the world through the eyes of someone who care about you and the beauties of the world as much as you do, everything becomes charming! Really appreciate your comment!
The greatest rewards of pure love and trust in it beautifully unfolded. Congrats on poem of the Day.
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A beautiful poem with a smooth flow.Looking all the beauty through your eyes. Enjoyed thoroughly. Thanks for sharing and congrats.
Thank you for reading! Really appreciate your comment! I am fortunate to be able to share my thoughts with the poets at PH.
How to express natural feeling more aptly than this? Superb! Congrats. Thank you for sharing. x
Wow! What a compliment! Thank You. Really appreciate your comment!
Love makes you see the beauty unseen before. A lovely poem that deserves to be a POD.
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I am enjoying the rugged mountains, the steep hills, the formidable sand-dunes, the wild dances of waves in the oceans - Everything, with Your eyes! .......outstanding conceptualization. Beautiful poem on love and life. Thanks and congratulations for being chosen this poem as the member poem of POD.
Thank you so much! Really appreciate your inspiring comments. I feel fortunate to be a part of this brilliant poet-community at PH!
love enjoys all, enjoys top to bottom, head to toe love enjoys all in positive sense the life...../// beautiful poem penned
Thank you so much! Really appreciate your comments! Glad to be a part of this thoughtful community!
Saw the rain, snow capped mountains and sandy beaches Through your eyes Enjoyed the experience With my own eyes! A picturesque poem!
Thank you so much! There's so much to see and feel in this beautiful world! Really appreciate your comments.
Incessant rain on a valley! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
Is that what you like best to picture in your mind? For me, too - it's a lovely experience! Thank you so much for reading my poem! Really appreciate your comment!
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A fascinating poem. I wish you merry Christmas and Happy New Year 2023.