Tuesday, August 6, 2013

With You, Without You Comments

Rating: 5.0

You gave me hope the day we met
Yet hope was lost the day I let
That touch from you slip from my reach
And only now I truly see
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D.L. Aceves
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Sarah Shahzad 11 January 2020

lovely wrote & you choice words cleverly & used them..! thanks 4 sharing :)

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Ramesh Rai 03 October 2013

short n emotional write.loved your ink

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Sina Farajzadeh 09 August 2013

Hi. This poem is realy tuchy. It's short but really full of emotions and feelings. thanks for sharing.

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