Wednesday, July 1, 2009

With You For Good Comments

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My mistress's property expanded widely
Above the unknown space, earth vividly.
beyond the mountainous regions now.
Leaving me thus unique trauma, thou.
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Delicate Heart
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Jessica Dehn 11 July 2014

Well said. Very eluding in the meaning it could be taken a few ways. Good job.

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Tina Chrzczon 02 July 2009

well done :) its a very good poem.

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Howard Kern 01 July 2009

Good Job! Don't know what to think! It could be taken many different ways! It souds as if do not wish to live any more on this plain without her. Am I right? She don't care? Just tell me please?

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