Tuesday, December 8, 2009

With You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Staring at the sky and lying on the grass
I think of how you and I could be together
Every time I think of us my heart does a back flip
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Justina Nicole Haner
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I just wish that you were mine to hold...everything is in this last line. i liked it so much..keep it up :)

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Jake Shelvey 22 December 2009

Hey, Justina, great poem, I really like it

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