Thursday, November 13, 2008

With You Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost in time
In your love
I grow in you
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Reshma Ramesh
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Sarwar Chowdhury 21 November 2008

When love comes spontaneously erupts dormant volcano! ! Nice indeed! 10+++

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'Lost in those lips In your hips I explode in you.'....hey now! ! ! a very moving poem....10/10 ...

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C. P. Sharma 16 November 2008

Reshama, well done in a few words. Actions speak louder than words as in the following song: Where I knelt upon my knee, We were as happy as we could be, Under the spreading chestnut tree, Under the _______ ____ ___ ___. (Replace 'spreading', 'chest', 'nut' and 'tree' with actions: For 'spreading', spread arms wide, for 'chest', tap chest with both hands, for 'nut', pat head with hands, for tree place arms close to side, bent upward from the elbow, hands spread, with palms up)

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Howard Johnson 13 November 2008

A very well written piece, Reshma, Enjoyed reading your tallent for writing..

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Joseph Poewhit 13 November 2008

A ticket on a super sonic love

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