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this is a mouth watering piece..............wow....pow....wow.......

Wow! ! This poem is very well written! ! I especially like your usage of word choice =) Those words you use aptly convey the main meanings and themes of your poem! ! I especially like the second stanza! ! It seems as if the second stanza is building up the tension, up into the climax, the last line. It is definitely a tour de force! ! btw: I really like your name, Julsera... Very unique, indeed! ! And poetic in a way...