Monday, August 20, 2018

With You Comments

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With you I am not alone

We are one
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Dawn Novus
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Edward Kofi Louis 26 August 2018

Your love has found a home in me! ! Thanks for sharing this lovely poem with us. Heart's love so deep.

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Daniel Brick 21 August 2018

I surrendered completely to this love poem. It seems to be spoken in a quiet moment when you and your partner are just relaxed and comfortable with each other. It's not a moment of Grand Passion, but it's the foundational rapport that keeps such passion alive and renews its energy with quiet moments like this that are the Proof Positive of Love. This poem calms me. It answers a deep human need for quiet certainty.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 August 2018

I will no longer fear/Slumber and peaceful we shall sleep/ Its not the end but the beginning....lovely expression! Loved reading this beautiful poem! (10)

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