Sunday, January 31, 2016

With You Comments

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So this is who I am
I carry you with me
So this is who I was
Went mute, broken for no cause
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Aabid Masroor
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Chinedu Dike 12 February 2018

Passionate rendition from the heart nicely embellished in poetic rhyme with conviction. Very heartfelt. Thanks for sharing Aabid.

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Roseann Shawiak 22 February 2016

Sad, heart wrenching poem, all is beautiful when your love is with you, without it your entire world dies. A heartfelt plea to love not to say goodbye. Touched my heart, Aabid. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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