Tuesday, June 28, 2011

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Rating: 5.0

I woke up in a dream today,
to a cold night in hell.
I watch how to the moon sits in the sky,
and how I stand in the dark alone.
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Black Love
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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 28 June 2011

Fantastic poem. Wonderfully conceived. I liked it for its remarkable imagery and decent style. Rated it 10. TFS..... Kindly read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2. Regards Akmal

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