Tuesday, February 16, 2021

With You Comments

Rating: 4.9

Fountain of natural fragrance in your body,
Sponge softness in your touching palms,
Flying precious pearls in your smiling teeth,
Sweetest voice of spring birds in your talking,
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Sultan Deen 28 February 2021

Beautiful loving poem; just with you O my darling

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Sultan Deen 28 February 2021

With you, o darling, my all spring time of life, my breaths, my veins, my heaven; with you O darling I am true of myself

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Moore Noore 24 February 2021

Superb and fantastic romantic valentines poem; just love it; how passionately written the loving words are; just great

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Adeeb Alfateh 23 February 2021

That's superb romantic poem

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me poet yeps poet 22 February 2021

PAL UR STILL ON GREAT POEM U DON'T READ ME

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 February 2021

Top stars for this fountain of fragrance, dear Poet.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 19 February 2021

A romantic poem, full of passion and superb imagery. Thank you Mahtab.

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Ravi Kopra 19 February 2021

PhooloN ki mehak aa rehi hai tere shreer se/ hathayleeaN reri baDi mulayum hain/ teri muskrahat main daant teray motioN se hain/

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May be a valentine mmessage or siply a divine love, whatever it is it really is a genuine love, a love without any reservation

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M Asim Nehal 17 February 2021

Love transpires everything around, fantastic poem with high feel of being in love.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 16 February 2021

The magic and wonders of being in love. A well expressed lovely poem.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 16 February 2021

Beautifully expressed poem, which breathes romance.

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Varsha M 16 February 2021

This is really a great ode to someone you relish and wish to be with always. Beautiful. Stupendous closing verse.

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