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Thankyou for your critique.I h

Thankyou for your kind remark

A beautiful poem well expressed.

Absolutely true, loveliest worded and Congratulations being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, dear Sally! 5 Stars full.I have enjoyed very much this well captured verse. Most deserving as TMPOTD.

With your words we accept that anything is possible.

A adorable poem! Many congratulations! !

Stay close; close by heart; o darling stay close; stay nearest than my feelings o darling; come; know me within you and let me know you within me; this is world- not bad but it's people can't tolerate our togetherness; so stay close; nearest then my feelings

Lovely poem... Congratulations on Poem of the Day...

There is no need here to write darlin`. Why not to write the whole word. Poets do that at times when they are trying to make a rhyme. But you`re not doing this. So why 'darlin'.? The argument in the poem is not convincing. There are other things that unite other than words