I walk barefoot
On the road to shoot at
And to draw the attention
With a view to build relation
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Jared Peterson3 minutes ago Sounds gritty I quickly get the mental picture but I cant place the emotion. I will try reading it again. Comment +1 ok
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Poetry Chanlar Rangel4 minutes ago Your poetic prowess is not lost on me. I rather enjoyed this and felt like I was understanding what was being said. Keep this up, you are very good at it. Comment +1