Tuesday, January 6, 2009

! ! ! With These Two Fingers Of Mine! ! ! Comments

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With my point and middle fingers
I cut off the thread
of cynical hatred and
of thwarted revenge
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Little Hatila ;) 15 January 2009

no one can continue living without dreaming...coz you have to have something to live for.... keep dreaming till one day all your dreams will come true....good luck....10 Hataw

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Min Sia 12 January 2009

Very well narrated and impressive message! Very heartwarming.. It's amazing..sequence is just perfect.. Thanks for sharing..

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I love the visions in this poem you write so well Krista

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Arik Carpenter 08 January 2009

I liked the formating alot, ., ., and it flowed really well.

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Salu Salu 07 January 2009

vengeance is well told.............rgrds/salu

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power to the poet with their two fingers, words can change a persons like if they are expressed creatively and your dreams are expressed in your words, very nice poem

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