Monday, March 6, 2023

With The Passing Clouds Comments

Rating: 5.0

Charming flowers on the wings of passing
Clouds where crystal froths flying like the dove,
Lone I'm walking behind the passing cruise
Holding your hands in mind on the green mat,
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
COMMENTS
Richard Wlodarski 08 March 2023

Superb vivid imagery enveloped in a stunningly beautiful poem. Great work, my friend Mahtab!

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 07 March 2023

Wonderful piece Mahtab Bravo! ! ! !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 07 March 2023

Stitch the ceaseless route of peaceful life verse....Excellent. A beautiful poem dear Mahtab.5 stars.

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