Friday, June 5, 2009

With The Moon Comments

Rating: 5.0

At a distance, his eyes are with the moon
Enamoured to be there, for so they moan
Of the pleasure of her eyes nice in tune.
Of beauty whose grace shows in her clear tone
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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Akram Saqib 24 October 2009

At a distance, his eyes are with the moon Enamoured to be there, for so they moan great rhythm in the poem

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Niken Kusuma Wardani 15 June 2009

Wow, this is great poem. You have the wit to paint the word in a frame and give us a clear picture, nice work, keep it up

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Antonio Liao 14 June 2009

everything brings light and every flower blooms...for each has not seen the beauty and if only you can barrow my eyes, then you can feel what I felt and see the beauty I saw....very nice for a prayer reflection...thank you....God bless....a 10+

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