With The Dust Of Ages Hung Comments

Eeerie; cleverly crafted verse which reveal answers to the human condition. Wonderful.

Surprise! I've just done the same as Gillian - and like the same ones particularly -but have engaged with them all (if rather too fast, since one or two give me ideas for 'my' poems...) but as you say, as long as it gets written and read...thanks, and I have to put it like this, keep writing!

Well Egal Bohen, I've sat here and read all your poems this morning. They are wonderful. I especially enjoyed the one about the boy of 11, one about the navigation of life, the one about the Unicorn infact I enjoyed them all and a Great Big thankyou to you!

When I was a small child, I would sit and stare at the 'shaft of golden light' and watch the dust moving like its own galaxy. This poem is a lovely description of that light. Raynette

I love the flow and rhythm of this poem. It is so well written that it just rolls right off your tongue. I really enjoyed this. Nice one. Sincerely, Mary