With The Deer Comments

Thank you for taking me on the walk with you- -it is good to move among wild animals without them fearing us, they were watchful but did not flee us. To bump into the mother and her children was the perfect curtain to draw over the morning, the shared smile and enduring memory of the deer's acceptance of us into their world. We should all try to take the readers on a walk.... hmmm.... maybe I shall give it a try... hmmm. Beautiful experience that you have shared - - - - 10+++++++++++++++++++++++++++

daniel, i started out thinking i'd check out earlier poems of yours but opened this one first. i liked this narrative of more ordinary things, or small dramas, that make up most of my days, and which i relate to. in some ways these in-between moments are the hardest to render. i too get excited by wildlife sightings such as these, participating as part of a whole instead of feeling like an oafish human outsider. i can't remember if you've commented on them, but such is the stuff of my poems loving the quiet and still life with turtle. i think it's age that makes us appreciate such things, yes? glen

With one word awesome. Thank you for sharing Daniel MARIO ODEKERKEN