With Subtle Care, I Did—with Subtle Care Poem by Mystic Qalandar

With Subtle Care, I Did—with Subtle Care

I bathed my being in the ocean of my heart,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

I bared the soul's deep mysteries without fear,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

I bore the thundering blows of sacred remembrance,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

My soaring thought brushed the edge of heaven's rim,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

Unfolding falcon-wings, I rose toward the Throne,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

To seek Your trace, I searched through countless worlds,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

In every mirror, only my face returned its gleam,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

The moon inscribed a love-letter, sent it to the sun,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

In darkest night, MyKoul set out in quest of light,
With subtle care I did—with subtle care.

—September 3,2025.

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