Monday, November 17, 2008

...With Smile Comments

Rating: 4.4

yes... i heard
your crispy voice
enough to give beats
to my resting senses
...
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Manonton Dalan
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Ken E Hall 18 March 2010

Very soft and inviting poem for the resting senses to keep our love hearts beating nice one regards

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 March 2010

yes... i heard your crispy voice enough to give beats to my resting senses it feels so good you couldn’t imagine the joy you have given me hope you do the same.lovely poem i can't resisting adding something to it... i liked it.... I am here you are there still i bear continously hear your foot steps it creates some sense m not at all tense it is unique i too seek your company there are not many you are one and only one come to me as only one-- read mine smile.... smile with laughter

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Aziz Alkaabi 15 March 2009

Your style is intriguing yet simple and flowing. I will read more!

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Nimal Dunuhinga 21 January 2009

A very beautiful poem like a flower in tears!

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Mohammed Albalushi 23 December 2008

you cant wait to hear again and i cant waitto read again such lovely poem, good luck

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Billy Joe Collins 17 November 2008

nicely wrote thanks for sharing

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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