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I held her hand And assured her of Promised Land! She was not to be worried Or for that matter, any load to be carried deepanshu4 hours ago Wow! where is the promised land? Comment 0

Autumn also has its own significance Acbpramukh Acbpramukh3 hours ago You may have gone beyond the non-verbal expression to some verbal assurance to cement the relationship. Dr.ACBrahmbhatt

Nice Christina Fitts4 hours ago I wish it didn't seem so forced, but the imagery was lovely

. zara to be4 hours ago Better than many poems here but some way you seem tangled to here like she is the only hero in your love story.Sorry if I got that wrong but SPRING AND AUTUMN were used to describe her or something but it was not that great.I advice you to quit un pleasant rhyme it holds down the writer most of the times.

I could not find spring As she tried to bring